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The Chart below shows the number of household in US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The Chart below shows the number of household in US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart gives information about the
number
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 of
families
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 in the US based on their annual salary in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, the
number
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 of households that earned less than $25.000 to $100.000 or more annually increased throughout the given period.
Moreover
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, more
families
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 made at least $100.000 yearly in 2015. In the first year, most
families
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 in the US made an annual income of $100.000 or more, making up almost 30% of the population. The
number
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then
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 experienced a slight fall to around 27% before growing significantly to just below 35% in 2015.
Furthermore
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, more than two-fifths of the US
families
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 were from the lower classes which earned less than $25.000 to $49.999 yearly in 2007. The numbers increased steadily, accounting for approximately 60% in 2015.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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 of middle-class households who earned $50.000 to $74.999 annually,
remaining
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 at the same level at one-fifth over eight years.
Similarly
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, the
number
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 of
families
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 who made an annual salary of $75.000 to $99.999 only had a slight increase from around 14% in 2007 to 15% in 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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