The pie charts below show the devices people in the age 18 to 25 age group used to watch TV in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the age 18 to 25 age group used to watch TV in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
The pie charts illustrate the electronic devices individuals aged 18 to 25 used to watch
TV
in two different years (2009 and 2019) in Canada.
Overall
, the most popular device in 2009 was conventional
TVs
,
while
in 2019, it was flat-screen
TVs
. As for the least used devices, tablets made up the smallest
proportion
in 2009,
whereas
conventional
TVs
accounted for the lowest
percentage
in 2019. The
percentage
of
people
who used mobile phones to watch
TV
in Canada was 15% in 2009, which
then
increased to 26% in 2019. The
proportion
of
people
watching
TV
on tablets was 5% in 2009, rising to 19% in 2019. The
percentage
of
people
watching
TV
on flat-screen
TVs
comprised 8% in 2009, and
this
grew to 26% in 2019.
On the other hand
, the
proportion
of
people
watching television on laptops in Canada was 20% in 2009, but
this
figure dropped to 12% in 2019.
Similarly
, the
percentage
of
people
watching
TV
on desktop computers was 18% in 2009, which fell to 12% in 2019. Meanwhile, the
proportion
of
people
watching
TV
on conventional
TVs
was 34% in 2009, dropping significantly to just 4% in 2019.
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