The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart gives information about the number of aged 65 and over in
Japan
, the Use synonyms
USA
and Use synonyms
Sweden
from 1940 to 2040.
In general, the percentage of elderly people increases sharply over the Use synonyms
centery
in all the countries. Correct your spelling
century
In addition
, Linking Words
initially
, Linking Words
Japan
had the lowest proportion Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
USA
had the highest point, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
at the end
of the period, Linking Words
Japan
Use synonyms
becomes
the country which had the highest Wrong verb form
became
elderly
people.
It is clearly seen that in the first 40 years of the period, the number of people who were over 65 in the Correct quantifier usage
number of elderly
USA
and Use synonyms
Sweden
increased rapidly, at about 6% Use synonyms
whereas
it decreased slightly, at around 2% in Linking Words
Japan
.
Use synonyms
By contrast
, from 1980 to 2020, the data in the United Linking Words
State
even dropped slowly, but they went up nearly 5% in Fix the agreement mistake
States
Japan
Use synonyms
,
and reached a peak at about 20% in Remove the comma
apply
Sweden
. Predicted figures Use synonyms
to
2040 rise Change preposition
for
drammatically
for all of these countries, especially in Correct your spelling
dramatically
Japan
, at about 27%, around 23% and 25% for the Use synonyms
USA
and Use synonyms
Sweden
respectively.Use synonyms
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