The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart gives information about the number of aged 65 and over in
Japan
, the USA
and Sweden
from 1940 to 2040.
In general, the percentage of elderly people increases sharply over the centery
in all the countries. Correct your spelling
century
In addition
, initially
, Japan
had the lowest proportion while
the USA
had the highest point, however
, at the end
of the period, Japan
becomes
the country which had the highest Wrong verb form
became
elderly
people.
It is clearly seen that in the first 40 years of the period, the number of people who were over 65 in the Correct quantifier usage
number of elderly
USA
and Sweden
increased rapidly, at about 6% whereas
it decreased slightly, at around 2% in Japan
.
By contrast
, from 1980 to 2020, the data in the United State
even dropped slowly, but they went up nearly 5% in Fix the agreement mistake
States
Japan
,
and reached a peak at about 20% in Remove the comma
apply
Sweden
. Predicted figures to
2040 rise Change preposition
for
drammatically
for all of these countries, especially in Correct your spelling
dramatically
Japan
, at about 27%, around 23% and 25% for the USA
and Sweden
respectively.Submitted by duyuyen18 on
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