The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the tourism visitors to a particular Caribbean
island
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between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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, in that period of time, the number of tourists who visited the Caribbean experienced a gradual increment. There are two types to enjoy the vacation’s object, either staying on the
cruise
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ships or on the
island
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.
Initially
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, in 2010 visitors preferred to stay on the
island
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than on the
cruise
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but in 2017 the tourism behaviour changed, and staying on the
cruise
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was more favourable. In that 7-year period,
Cruise
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ships’ visitors significantly increased. At
first,
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in 2010, the guests were approximately 0.25
million
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, the number doubled in 2011 to 0.5
million
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.
However
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, In 2012, it slightly decreased to the same level as in 2010,but there were gradual increments from 2013 to 2017. At
last
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, In 2017, it reached 2
million
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people which is eight times greater than in 2010.
On the other hand
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, the number of arrivals on the
island
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grows, but can not compete with the
cruise
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option. it relatively had stagnancy numbers. In 2010, it hit around 0.75
million
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. It increased notably until 2013 to 1.5
million
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people.
Furthermore
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, it had 0% growth until the end of the period of time and even had decrement in 2016.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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