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You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the air company. In your letter give the details of the flight explain what the problem with the food was say what you would like the air company to do

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Good afternoon, dear sir/madam. My name is Anastassia, I flew with your plane from Toronto to
Madrind
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Madrid
 a week ago.
Flight
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 number was TR2345. First of all, I have to say that I'm your frequent customer,
moreover
, it was my first
dissapoint
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disappoint
 for all these years. so, I'm writing
this
lette
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letter
 with the purpose of
expaining
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explaining
 the problem and trying to find any possible solution. As you know, nowadays we can choose the meal for a
flight
 for an extra fee. I had paid for the
chiken
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chicken
 and rice kosher meal. But when it was the food
destribution
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distribution
, the stewardess said
me
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 that they
don't
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 have my meal. As you know,
it's
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it was
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 a very long
flights
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, and I was starving during
all
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apply
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the
flight
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whole flight
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. I was
ableto
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able to
 buy only chips and chocolate there.
That is
 why I'm convinced that it will be fair of you to offer
to
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me
the
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 free meal on my next
flight
,
furthermore
, I think that it may be even more. Thanks in advance, sincerely yours. Anastassia.
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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