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You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the air company. In your letter give the details of the flight explain what the problem with the food was say what you would like the air company to do

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Good afternoon, dear sir/madam. My name is Anastassia, I flew with your plane from Toronto to Madrid a week ago. The
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 number was TR2345. First of all, I have to say that I'm your frequent customer,
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, it was my first
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 all these years. so, I'm writing
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 letter with the purpose of explaining the problem and trying to find any possible solution. As you know, nowadays we can choose the meal for a
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 for an extra fee. I had paid for the chicken and rice kosher meal. But when it was the food distribution, the stewardess said to me that they didn't have my meal. As you know, it was a very long
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, and I was starving during the whole
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. I was able to buy only chips and chocolate there.
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 why I'm convinced that it will be fair of you to offer me a free meal on my next
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,
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, I think that it may be even more. Thanks in advance, sincerely yours. Anastassia.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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