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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart demonstrates the distribution of American
households
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 by distinct
income
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 brackets for the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, there is a visible trend of increasing funds in
households
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 in the higher
income
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 categories over the examined period. In 2007,
households
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 earning between $25,000 and $49,999 represented the largest statistics, approaching 30 million. Oppositely, the $100,000 or higher
income
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 accounted for the smallest proportion, with approximately 15 million
households
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. The year 2011 witnessed a marginal shift in
this
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 distribution, with the $50,000 to $74,999 segment emerging as the most jammed, despite an
overall
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 decline in the count of
households
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 earning less than $25,000. By 2015, a marked transformation was apparent, as
households
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 earning $100,000 or more had it hard to exceed 30 million,
hence
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 establishing itself as the predominant
income
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 category. Meanwhile, the $25,000 to $49,999 experienced a noticeable reduction, highlighting a substantial progression toward elevated
income
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 levels among American
households
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, income with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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