The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The table compares the

number

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of transportation modes used in England in 1985 and 2000.

Overall

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, it is evident that there was a

decrease

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decreasing

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trend of walking, bicycle and local

bus

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users

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Wherease

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Whereas

, the remaining modes of

travel

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experienced a rising

number

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. In 1985, people who walked was 255, but

this

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number

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slightly

decrease

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decreased

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to 237 walkers by 2000.

Bicycle

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Bicycles

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were

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apply

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also

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showed

decreasing

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a decreasing

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amount from 51

users

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in 1985 to 41

users

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by 2000, which made

bicycle

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bicycles

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became

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apply

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the least

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apply

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travel

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mode used by that year.

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, local

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bus

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buses

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had a significant rise from 429 to 274 at the same period of time.

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car

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the car

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exhibited

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had

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3199

users

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in 1985, making it the highest

travel

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mode used in that year.

This

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number

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sharply climbed to 4806 by 2000 and remained the most popular transportation.

Then

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, in 1985, train and other

transportations

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transportation

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were 289 and 450, respectively. These numbers rose gradually to 366 and 585 by 2000.

Long distance

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bus

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buses

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was 54 in 1985,

meanwhile

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meanwhile,

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taxi

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taxis

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had only 13, making the lowest mode of

travel

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used in that year. Both of them,

however

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, increased their numbers by 2000,

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bus

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the bus

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became 124 and

taxi

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the taxi

a taxi

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was 42.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, bus, users, travel with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

mode of travel
popularity
decline/increase
public transport
urbanization
infrastructure
economic factors
environmental impact
urban planning
technological advancements
data points
trend
usage
comparison
implications

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