The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table compares the
number
of transportation modes used in England in 1985 and 2000.
Overall
, it is evident that there was a decrease
trend of walking, bicycle and local Change the verb form
decreasing
bus
users
. Wherease
, the remaining modes of Correct your spelling
Whereas
travel
experienced a rising number
.
In 1985, people who walked was 255, but this
number
slightly decrease
to 237 walkers by 2000. Wrong verb form
decreased
Bicycle
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Bicycles
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
showed decreasing
amount from 51 Correct article usage
a decreasing
users
in 1985 to 41 users
by 2000, which made bicycle
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bicycles
became
the least Verb problem
apply
of
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apply
travel
mode used by that year. Furthermore
, local bus
had a significant rise from 429 to 274 at the same period of time.
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buses
Conversely
, car
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the car
exhibited
3199 Verb problem
had
users
in 1985, making it the highest travel
mode used in that year. This
number
sharply climbed to 4806 by 2000 and remained the most popular transportation. Then
, in 1985, train and other transportations
were 289 and 450, respectively. These numbers rose gradually to 366 and 585 by 2000. Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
Long distance
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Long-distance
bus
was 54 in 1985, Fix the agreement mistake
buses
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
taxi
had only 13, making the lowest mode of Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
travel
used in that year. Both of them, however
, increased their numbers by 2000, bus
became 124 and Add an article
the bus
taxi
was 42.Add an article
the taxi
a taxi
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, bus, users, travel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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