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the chart shows requests for informations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

the chart shows requests for informations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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 of requests
such
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 as in person, by letter/email and by
telephone
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 which are made at a
tourist
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office
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 in the United Kingdom between
January
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 and
June
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. In
January
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, around 900
people
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 used a
telephone
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 to contact the
tourist
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office
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 in the United Kingdom, which made it the most common way to ask for information.
However
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, in the following month,
people
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 who used the
telephone
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 to contact the
tourist
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office
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 experienced a dip of 100
people
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.
Then
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 it rose from February to March to about 1000
people
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 and remained stable until April. The usage of the
telephone
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 had a massive increase until
June
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 to about 1600
people
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. The requests from letters or emails to the
tourist
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 information centre were slightly below 800 in
January
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 and
then
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 experienced a modest decline to February by 50
people
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. The
number
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 stayed the same until March before continuing its downfall until May at a little under 400 and did not change until the end of the period. Compared to the other two requests,
people
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 who visited the information
office
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 in person were the lowest, at above 400 in
January
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. The
number
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then
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 surged drastically until
June
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 and touched the highest point at approximately 1900
people
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.
Overall
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, during six months, the request in person was the highest
number
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 of
people
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 in
June
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 among the usage of
telephone
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 and letter or email. Meanwhile, the usage of email became the lowest in the end.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, telephone, tourist, office, january, june, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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