The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The Bar chart illustrates the rate daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 different cities
such
as Mexico City
, Beijing, Calcutta
and Los
Angeles
in 2000. The number is measured in micrograms
per m3.
Overall
, Mexico City
was the top city
producing SO2 and N2O at daily highest and lowest level
every single day. Fix the agreement mistake
levels
In contrast
, Los
Angeles
was the metropolitan with the lowest pollution of SO2 and Calcutta
was the town with the lowest maximum N2O production but Beijing was the area with a daily minimum N2O level.
Mexico City
was the top producer of both SO2 and N2O among the other countries, with 200 and 207 respectively. Minimally the place produced 80 micrograms
of SO2 and 113 of N2O which is even higher than the one produced in Los
Angeles
which is the second-highest area to produce N20 at 104 micrograms
. Surprisingly, SO2 in Los
Angeles
was as low as 10 micrograms
at maximum and 2 at minimum which is the lowest compared to the other cities.
The second biggest city
which emitted SO2 was the capital of China. Exactly 100 grams of the gas polluted the air, but minimally only a quarter of it was released into the air. Compared to Beijing, Calcutta
had about 50% of Beijing’s maximum and minimum SO2 production with 59% and 47% milligrams. Both Beijing and Calcutta
’s N2O maximum emission
were similar in number, at 54 and 52 milligrams, yet at the lowest, Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
Calcutta
had 30 milligrams and Beijing’s production was only roughly half of that of Calcutta
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