The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Technology has seen impressive growth over the past few decades, which has in turn transformed our lives in numerous ways. The

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industry has been revolutionized in

such

a way that majority of the

people

now rely on mobile

phones

for both communication and

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business

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However

, the continuous use of these devices can cause social or medical issues

such

as depression and antisocial behaviours.

While

I acknowledge the health problems caused by the overuse of mobile

phones

, I firmly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Firstly

, cell phone helps

people

to stay connected across the globe. In the past,

people

had to rely on letters and

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to exchange

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information. Nowadays platforms like WhatsApp, telegram, Instagram, Facebook etc. have made communication significantly easier. As long as one has an internet connection, staying connected with others is seamless. The interaction can be both personal or

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For example

,

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phones

allow access to office

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and applications like Microsoft

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enabling individuals to participate in office meetings and calls without the need to be physically present at a computer or in

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On the other hand

, there is a growing concern about the impact of

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phones

on mental health. It has been observed that an increasing number

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and adults are seeking help for issues related to mental well-being. A study conducted by the University of California

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found that

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people

who use their cell

phones

for more than three hours a day are more likely to exhibit antisocial behaviour and experience depression. To address these concerns, it is essential to educate the public about the potential side effects of excessive

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use and encourage children to engage in outdoor activities. In conclusion,

while

there are undeniable adverse effects associated with the overuse of mobile phone usage, these can be through awareness and education.

On the other hand

, mobile

phones

remain indispensable tools that offer significant benefits in both personal and professional contexts.