You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. »

The table below shows the

sales

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of Fairtrade-labelled

coffee

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and

bananas

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in 1999 and 2004 with different amounts of millions of

Euros

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. It is

showed

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shown

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in different countries

such

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UK

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the UK

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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and

Sweden

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). It can be seen from the table that the highest

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of

coffee

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in 1999 were made in Denmark with a significant

amount

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of 1.8

million

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euros

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.

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in

Sweden

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it had the lowest

amount

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of people that purchased

coffee

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in 1999 with an

amount

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of 0.8

million

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.

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the

sales

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of

bananas

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in the year of 1999 the most

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were done in Switzerland with a high

amount

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of 15

million

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. The lowest

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were done in Belgium with a low number of Euro which is 0.6

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. Moving on

by

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to

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the year

of

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apply

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2004 we can see that

Denmarks

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Denmark's

Denmarks'

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ranking

of

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in

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coffee

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sales

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went down by a lot, which now by 2004 the highest ranking was taken by the

UK

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. The

UK

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has earned up to 20

million

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Euros

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in

sales

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. The

sales

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have

went

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up by 18.5

million

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.

Still

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the lowest

sales

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of

coffee

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is

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are

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in

Sweden

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with an

amount

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of 1

million

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.

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drinking

coffee

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in

Sweden

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isn't popular compared to other countries in

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apply

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European

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Europe

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. The

amount

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of

bananas

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sold in the year

of

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apply

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2004, Switzerland still remains on top with a high

amount

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of 47

million

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Euros

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. In 2004

Sweden

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has

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had

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the lowest

amount

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of

bananas

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purchased . In

conclusion

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conclusion,

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we can

telll

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tell

that in the

UK

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it is getting more and more popular to get

coffees

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coffee

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.

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for

the

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apply

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other countries

coffee

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isnt

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isn't

as popular as it is in the

UK

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.especially

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especially

for the

Sweden

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peoples

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people

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. For the

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amount

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number

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of

bananas

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sold it

has been

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was

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popular among the

Switzerlands

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Switzerland

to buy

bananas

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from 1999-2004.