You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should write at least 150 words.
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The table below shows the
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee
and bananas
in 1999 and 2004 with different amounts of millions of Euros
. It is showed
in different countries Wrong verb form
shown
such
as (UK
, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Correct article usage
the UK
Sweden
).
It can be seen from the table that the highest sales
of coffee
in 1999 were made in Denmark with a significant amount
of 1.8 million
euros
. While
in Sweden
it had the lowest amount
of people that purchased coffee
in 1999 with an amount
of 0.8 million
. While
the sales
of bananas
in the year of 1999 the most sales
were done in Switzerland with a high amount
of 15 million
. The lowest sales
were done in Belgium with a low number of Euro which is 0.6 million
.
Moving on by
the year Change preposition
to
of
2004 we can see that Change preposition
apply
Denmarks
ranking Change noun form
Denmark's
Denmarks'
of
Change preposition
in
coffee
sales
went down by a lot, which now by 2004 the highest ranking was taken by the UK
. The UK
has earned up to 20 million
Euros
in sales
. The sales
have went
up by 18.5 Change the verb form
gone
million
. Still
the lowest Add a comma
Still,
sales
of coffee
is
in Change the verb form
are
Sweden
with an amount
of 1 million
. Since maybe
drinking Correct word choice
Maybe
coffee
in Sweden
isn't popular compared to other countries in the
Correct article usage
apply
European
. The Correct your spelling
Europe
amount
of bananas
sold in the year of
2004, Switzerland still remains on top with a high Change preposition
apply
amount
of 47 million
Euros
. In 2004 Sweden
has
the lowest Wrong verb form
had
amount
of bananas
purchased .
In conclusion
we can Add a comma
conclusion,
telll
that in the Correct your spelling
tell
UK
it is getting more and more popular to get coffees
. Fix the agreement mistake
coffee
While
for the
other countries Correct article usage
apply
coffee
isnt
as popular as it is in the Correct your spelling
isn't
UK
.especially
for the Correct your spelling
especially
Sweden
peoples
. For the Fix the agreement mistake
people
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
bananas
sold it has been
popular among the Wrong verb form
was
Switzerlands
to buy Correct your spelling
Switzerland
bananas
from 1999-2004.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, euros, uk, sweden, amount, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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