The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The figure gives data about the
subway
systems in six cities of the world.
Overall
, it can be seen that the oldest subway
system
is dedicated to London and also
it has the longest route in comparison with other cities. Kyoto has the shortest path and Tokyo carries the largest amount of people within other cities.
As mentioned before, the date of the subway
system
of London opened in 1863, whereas
the newest underground railway system
is related to Los Angeles which opened in 2001. Actually, the longest route is related to London as well with 394 km. While
in Kyoto, this
path is 11km. It is also
clear that the minimum of passengers
per year in Kyoto is 45 million
. Of course, in Tokyo, the largest amount of passengers
is 1927 million
.
Looking at the details, Paris is the second oldest subway
system
which opened in 1900 with 1191 million
passengers
. Los Angeles is also
the fifth city that carries 50 million
passengers
annually.Submitted by brightstargalaxy on
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