The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of britain. The table shows where the moneys came from and the charts show how it is distributed.
The table compares the police budget in two different
years
in one city, Use synonyms
while
the pie chart illustrates how much the expenditure is in three categories.
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Overall
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it is clear that
the budgets for the two Linking Words
years
were similar to each other, Use synonyms
however
, there was a minor rise in the total. It can be seen that the majority of the income was spent on police officers and other Linking Words
stuff
salaries during the period.
Looking in more detail at financial sources, the National Government gave it Correct your spelling
staff
the
large amount of the police Change the article
a
budgets
, with 177.5 Fix the agreement mistake
budget
million
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pounds
and 177.8 Use synonyms
million
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pounds
, respectively. Use synonyms
Whereas
the Local Taxes came in second stage with more than 91 Linking Words
million
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pounds
in 2017 and grew to 102 Use synonyms
million
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pounds
in 2018. The number in the other source was similar, Use synonyms
such
as grants with 38 Linking Words
million
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pounds
in 2017 and around 38.5 Use synonyms
million
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pounds
in 2018. There was a gradual upturn in the total budgets from approximately £304.7 Use synonyms
million
to £318.6 Use synonyms
million
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pounds
.
Turning now to how the money was spent in both Use synonyms
years
, salaries accounted for the largest proportion of devoted, making up 75%, Use synonyms
while
the percentage dropped Linking Words
that
the following year with 69% of the sum. Correct word choice
apply
According to
the data, in 2017 the technology allocation was only 8%, after that, in 2018, the technology roughly doubled their percentage to 14%. Linking Words
Finally
, buildings and transport remained relatively stable at 17% Linking Words
at
both Change preposition
in
years
.Use synonyms
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