the diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish
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the drying
a drying
skins
to remove moisture. Use synonyms
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skins
are efficiently transported to a factory, where they undergo a thorough washing using a mixture of water and lime. Use synonyms
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skins
of any impurities, preparing them for Use synonyms
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treatment. Immediately after, the Linking Words
skins
are soaked in a lime solution, which softens and prepares them optimally for the next stages.
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, the Linking Words
leather
is treated with tannin, a combination of water and vegetable matter, in a crucial step known as tanning. Use synonyms
This
treatment significantly strengthens the Linking Words
leather
, making it durable and resistant to decay. Once the tanning is complete, the Use synonyms
leather
is passed through a mechanical roller to be evenly flattened, ensuring it has a consistent texture and thickness.
In the final stages of the process, the Use synonyms
leather
is carefully polished to enhance its appearance and achieve a smooth, refined finish. After polishing, the Use synonyms
leather
is immediately ready to be utilized in the production of various goods Use synonyms
such
as bags, shoes, and other accessories.Linking Words
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