You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.
Numorous
of
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apply
peoples
says that Fix the agreement mistake
people
Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
should spend Correct your spelling
government
budget
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the budget
for
support private Change preposition
to
school
. Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Due
to
, it will help Correct pronoun usage
to this
development
Replace the word
develop
education
system. In my opinion, they should not be Correct article usage
the education
fouded
by public money, private Correct your spelling
founded
funded
school
already have Fix the agreement mistake
schools
highly profitable
from Replace the word
high profits
school
tuition and private school
are a Fix the agreement mistake
schools
bussiness
created to seek profit like other Correct your spelling
business
bussiness
.
Correct your spelling
business
businesses
To begin
with, nowadays average
of private Correct article usage
the average
school
is Fix the agreement mistake
schools
more
increasing for Correct quantifier usage
apply
demand
of parents that want to give the Add an article
the demand
woderful
thing Correct your spelling
wonderful
for
their Change preposition
to
child
so education is main essential for Fix the agreement mistake
children
children
, several family
Fix the agreement mistake
families
belive
aboy the expensive tuition can Correct your spelling
believe
garuntee
quailities of their Correct your spelling
guarantee
children
life. Since, the negative news about private Change noun form
children's
school
like, in my hometown Fix the agreement mistake
schools
techer
use a Correct your spelling
teachers
vilence
with the Correct your spelling
violence
kidergarden
student resulting in serious injury or some Correct your spelling
kindergarten
school
teachers are unable to take care of all children
because of the different numbers, which may cause children
to be naughty and have accidents. Owing to, lower or in some poor area is free school
tuition. Hence
, school
institution is indemand
for Correct your spelling
in-demand
in demand
parent
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parents
todays
.
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today
Moreover
, currently these private organisation
there are many new courses being promoted as relevant to today's globalized life. Fix the agreement mistake
organisations
For instance
, some private school
are advestising that they Fix the agreement mistake
schools
focused
on technology and start teaching students Wrong verb form
focus
kindergarden
ages so or in some Correct your spelling
kindergarten
school
Fix the agreement mistake
schools
garuntee
that their student Correct your spelling
guarantee
access
Add a missing verb
have access
in
top Change preposition
to
university
Fix the agreement mistake
universities
of
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in
countey
and worldwide. Correct your spelling
countries
While
,
public Remove the comma
apply
school
have a problem with the number of teachers being Fix the agreement mistake
schools
in contrast
to the number of students. The budget is not enough for every school
, so the budget should be used to manage government schools to have better quality than before.
To sum up
, goverment
authorities should take care Correct your spelling
government
managing
the Change preposition
of managing
buddest
for Correct your spelling
budget
develop
Change the verb form
developing
education
system with every public Correct article usage
the education
school
especially
in poor Add the comma(s)
, especially
area
. For Fix the agreement mistake
areas
the
purpose Correct determiner usage
this
raise
the standards of the Wrong verb form
raising
school
and build
confidence among parents to erase the stereotype of state schools that are not of quality.Wrong verb form
building
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task achievement
Ensure that your argument is clearly presented in the introduction. Your stance on private schools not receiving public funding is clear, but the reasons supporting your opinion could be more precisely stated upfront.
coherence cohesion
Be careful with grammatical errors and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. This will make your points clearer and easier to understand.
coherence cohesion
Try to avoid run-on sentences. Breaking your ideas into shorter, distinct sentences will help present your arguments more clearly and improve readability.
task achievement
You have provided relevant examples to support your points, such as the issues faced by private schools and the benefits provided by public funding in poor areas.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has an introduction and conclusion, successfully framing your argument.