Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Zoos are places where the government keep wild

animals

,

endangered

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and endangered

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species in the gardens for the purpose of : study, conservation or display to the public.People have different

perspective

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of

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the initiative of keeping them in there;

however

,I am going to discuss both sides with evidence for each claim. Zoos are crucial in keeping them, mainly the endangered ones from the murderous outside world. The National Wild Life Federation has enforced several laws to protect them throughout

past

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few decades. As their natural habitats are being destroyed and explored by human beings: deforestation,bush destruction and habitat destruction. These species face an experiential threat.

For instance

, endangered mammals like pandas are kept in Zoo Negara Malaysia to prevent them from extinction. In conclusion, menageries are a key institution to

seperate

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separate

these creatures from the real world.

On the other hand

, one of the primary drawbacks of storing

animals

in wildlife refuges is the poor conditions of it to attend the niche of

animals

.

Animals

in animal refuges are frequently kept in a smaller place than their natural habitats; their spaces

in

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apply

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there are limited.From

this

,

animals

may experience psychological problems

such

as stress and depression.Many species show a significant decline in their well-being

due to

the inability to explore natural behaviours which is good for their health.

For instance

,elephants that are kept in menagerie may experience severe stress

due to

inability

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to explore their natural habitat.

To sum up

,

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the reserves

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reserves

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bad atmosphere

limit

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the growth of these vertebrates. In conclusion, taking everything into consideration, zoos are essential in protecting wild

animals

from the outside world. We

also

should lend a helping hand in helping the government

protecting

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these animal

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this animal

these animals

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by doing our parts.You can sign up

in

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a volunteering event held by Zoo Negara, the Keeperku Program; through

this

program,you can

enquire

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more in-depth knowledge about

this

issue.