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The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#priority #businesses #money #responsibilities
It is a topic for debate whether businesses should prioritise printing money and ignore the social responsibility that comes
along with
 that or not.
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 over the latter would have
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 advantages, I feel it is equally important for them to be socially responsible.
Firstly
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 highly unlikely that emphasizing
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economical
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 output would come without costing
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society at a human level. The world's most profitable companies like Google, Amazon, Facebook, Twitter etc have created and expanded on products like social media applications, which are free of cost in monetary terms, but have led to
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 rise
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 emotional and mental disorders as they all fight for their consumers' attention. If
such
 companies are not held accountable, people's health
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 immensely affected.
Secondly
, there are a lot of
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organizations that sell tobacco products, advertising them via celebrities leading to
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. Many of the enterprises
also
 engage in morally incorrect practices like child
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, exploitation of workers etc in order to maximise their sales revenue. Without making them responsible in some form,
this
 cannot be avoided. In order to achieve
this
, some form of
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 can be imposed on them, whether legal or societal
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 or owning up to their responsibilities can be rewarded in a way that
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holds a higher value for them.
To conclude
, I feel the primary motive of businesses should still be increasing profits but that shouldn't come at the society's moral and social cost and
this
 cannot happen until they have some form of responsibility.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • profit maximization
  • economic development
  • Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR)
  • shareholders
  • moral obligation
  • reputation
  • customer loyalty
  • sustainable business models
  • accountability
  • ethical practices
  • regulations
  • consumer expectations
  • economic sustainability
  • stakeholders
  • social impact
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