The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a topic for debate whether businesses should prioritise printing money and ignore the social responsibility that comes

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that or not.

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over the latter would have

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advantages, I feel it is equally important for them to be socially responsible.

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highly unlikely that emphasizing

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output would come without costing

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society at a human level. The world's most profitable companies like Google, Amazon, Facebook, Twitter etc have created and expanded on products like social media applications, which are free of cost in monetary terms, but have led to

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rise

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emotional and mental disorders as they all fight for their consumers' attention. If

such

companies are not held accountable, people's health

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immensely affected.

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organizations that sell tobacco products, advertising them via celebrities leading to

such

forms of

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. Many of the enterprises

also

engage in morally incorrect practices like child

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, exploitation of workers etc in order to maximise their sales revenue. Without making them responsible in some form,

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cannot be avoided. In order to achieve

this

, some form of

regulations

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can be imposed on them, whether legal or societal

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or owning up to their responsibilities can be rewarded in a way that

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holds a higher value for them.

To conclude

, I feel the primary motive of businesses should still be increasing profits but that shouldn't come at the society's moral and social cost and

this

cannot happen until they have some form of responsibility.