The graph below shows the number of oveseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009
The line graph illustrates information about the rate of foreign visitors segmented based on their
aim
of visiting the UK into Holiday, Business
and seeing loved ones from 1989 until 2009 at with 5th interval.
From an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that despite the fluctuating patterns observed in all categories, they were an increase
trend throughout. Change the verb form
increasing
Additionally
, it seems that the UK is the Mecca of the spending holiday.
To begin
with holiday purpose, it is obvious that its initial number
, which was higher than 6 million, was further
from the others, and it dramatically rose until achieved approximately 10 million travelers
in Change the spelling
travellers
this
aim
before dropping to under 8 million. After the decline, it significantly surged.
The number
of people with a business
trip aim
was shown two drops in 1994 and 2004 in which both of them met the travelers
with the Change the spelling
travellers
aim
of meeting acquaintances. There was a dramatic and parallel surge for both groups surrounded by the two mentioned drops. Although
the number
of the
Correct article usage
apply
travelers
Change the spelling
travellers
of
these two aims met each other, the level of the popularity of the UK to visit Change preposition
for
friend
and relatives never suppressed the rate of a Fix the agreement mistake
friends
business
trip. Furthermore
, after 2004, the number
of friends’ and relatives’ visitors fell slightly, meanwhile, tendency
towards a Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
business
trip faced with
a decline after a noticeable surge.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words aim, business, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surged" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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