The graph below shows the number of oveseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009

The graph below shows the number of oveseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009
The line graph illustrates information about the rate of foreign visitors segmented based on their
aim
of visiting the UK into Holiday,
Business
and seeing loved ones from 1989 until 2009 at with 5th interval. From an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that despite the fluctuating patterns observed in all categories, they were an
increase
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trend throughout.
Additionally
, it seems that the UK is the Mecca of the spending holiday.
To begin
with holiday purpose, it is obvious that its initial
number
, which was higher than 6 million, was
further
from the others, and it dramatically rose until achieved approximately 10 million
travelers
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in
this
aim
before dropping to under 8 million. After the decline, it significantly surged. The
number
of people with a
business
trip
aim
was shown two drops in 1994 and 2004 in which both of them met the
travelers
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with the
aim
of meeting acquaintances. There was a dramatic and parallel surge for both groups surrounded by the two mentioned drops.
Although
the
number
of
the
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travelers
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of
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these two aims met each other, the level of the popularity of the UK to visit
friend
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and relatives never suppressed the rate of a
business
trip.
Furthermore
, after 2004, the
number
of friends’ and relatives’ visitors fell slightly, meanwhile,
tendency
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towards a
business
trip faced
with
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a decline after a noticeable surge.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words aim, business, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "surged" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.

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