The chart below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. Summarize the information y selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. 

Summarize the information y selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart above illustrates the distribution of the
consumption
of
energy
in a variety of sources in the UK and the USA between 2000 and 2006. Generally, there has been a decrease in the
consumption
of coal and nuclear,
while
the
consumption
of
gas
has increased. Coal was one of the major
energy
sources for the two countries in 2000 at 35% and 30% respectively,
however
,
such
a trend in
gas
usage has
deciled
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declined
decided
significantly to 25% in the US and 15% in the UK in 2006.
Gas
was
a
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an
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energy
source with the most significant increase in the
porpotion
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proportion
portion
of
energy
usage, with the US's
gas
consumption
rising from 15% to 25% and the British figure almost doubling in 2006 at 40%, making it the
perdominant
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predominant
source of
energy
for Britain.
While
the
consumption
of Nuclear
energy
accounted for a similar
porportion
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proportion
in the US over the years, the usage of
energy
in the UK has nearly been halved to a level below 10% in 2006. For "oil" and "other renewable sources", percentages over the years have remained at similar levels with only minimal fluctuations presented.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, energy, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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