You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
amount
of CO2 that individuals in four European countries emitted from 1967 to 2007. Use synonyms
Overall
, the United Kingdom and Sweden showed a declining tendency Linking Words
whereas
Italy and Portugal produced a larger Linking Words
amount
of CO2 in 2007. The United Kingdom is the country with the largest emission of CO2 and Portugal with the least Use synonyms
througout
the whole examined period.
Starting from the countries with a larger Correct your spelling
throughout
amount
of Use synonyms
the
emission of CO2, Portugal experienced the most dramatic rise from about 1 metric ton to above Correct article usage
apply
5metric
Correct your spelling
5 metric
tonnes
in 1997, from which it rose more mildly until 2007 when it reached below 6 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, Italy Linking Words
also
produced a larger Linking Words
amount
of CO2, from just above 4 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
in 1967 to just below 8 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
in 1997. Use synonyms
Then
the graph for Italy remained unchanged until 2007, standing much higher than Portugal.
Turning to the graphs with a downward tendency, the United Kingdom demonstrated a constant drop from below 11 metric Linking Words
tonnes
to approximately 9 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
for the four decades Use synonyms
although
it still stood at the highest of all. Sweden Linking Words
also
experienced a more radical decline from 1977 when it reached Linking Words
the
peak at over 10 metric Correct article usage
a
tonnes
to below 6 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
in 2007 in spite of a sharp increase from nearly 9 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
to just above 10 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
in 1977.Use synonyms
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