The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table displays how the jobless populace in the UK allocates their daily activity between morning and afternoon as reported one year ago.
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, it is immediately apparent that ladies prefer to execute social activities compared to gents; they prefer something individualistic. For housework,
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large proportion of women spent their morning breeze with household chores which stood at 49%;
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, it declined by 28% in the evening.As for social activities: shopping,and job hunting tend to be done in the morning
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visiting friends and relatives was more frequent in the cocktail hour.
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, both genders depict similar attitudes
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staying in bed and doing nothing in broad daylight which
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at 8% and 3% respectively.
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, gentlemen in favour of gardening in the forenoon amounted to
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% difference compared to post-meridiem. The shares of workless men for decorating and walking is slightly higher than women which is at 4% and 3% contrast.
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species mitigated more interest in watching TV after midday at 14%
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