The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table displays how the jobless populace in the UK allocates their daily activity between morning and afternoon as reported one year ago.
Overall
, it is immediately apparent that ladies prefer to execute social activities compared to gents; they prefer something individualistic.
For housework, the
large proportion of women spent their morning breeze with household chores which stood at 49%; Correct article usage
a
however
, it declined by 28% in the evening.As for social activities: shopping,and job hunting tend to be done in the morning while
visiting friends and relatives was more frequent in the cocktail hour.Conversely
, both genders depict similar attitude
Fix the agreement mistake
attitudes
in
staying in bed and Change preposition
toward
did
nothing Wrong verb form
doing
on
Change preposition
in
a
broad daylight Remove the article
apply
which
at 8% and 3% respectively.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Gentleman
in favour of gardening in the forenoon amounted toFix the agreement mistake
Gentlemen
3
% difference compared to post-meridiem. The shares of workless men for decorating and walking is slightly higher than women which Correct article usage
a 3
at
4% and 3% contrast.Add a missing verb
is at
This
species mitigated more interest watching
TV after midday at 14%Change preposition
in watching
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