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The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.

The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
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The bar graph illustrates the number of activities performed and
time
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 spent by teenagers between 2002 to 2007 in Chester.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the diagram the most
time
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 utilised by youngsters on watching television in all years. The least
time
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 spent playing bowling in all years.
Whereas
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 the homework was decreased over the period. It is conspicuous that in 2002 and 2003, the maximum
time
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 spent watching TV was 25
hours
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, which increased to nearly 37
hours
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 in 2007.
In addition
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, the second highest choice of children was watching DVDs incremented from 11
hours
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 to peak at 18
hours
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 in 2004,
further
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, it shrunk to 10
hours
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 in 2007. Probing ahead, the students showed less interest every year, they consumed 13
hours
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 in 2002 and it plummeted to 7
hours
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 after some fluctuations in 2007,
While
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 youngsters took more interest in doing shopping,
initially
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, they spent 7
hours
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 per week in 2002, after that it augmented every year and touched to 15
hours
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 in 2006 and 2007.
Moreover
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, the least
time
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 spent by the teenager was bowling where they used 4
hours
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 in 2002 and it declined to 1 hour in 2007, after some oscillations.Only, going to pubs or discos, these used 8
hours
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 in 2002 after it rose gently and became constant from 2004 to 2006, after that it skyrocketed and hit 18
hours
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 in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, hours with synonyms.
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