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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
consumption
 of various types of
meat
,
such
 as
fish
, lamb, beef and chicken in one country in Europe in the period of 25 years between 1979 and 2004.
Overall
,
people
 mostly preferred to eat chicken rather than other kinds of
meat
,
moreover
, its
consumption
 increased during
the
Correct determiner usage
that
show examples
 time. It
also
 should be mentioned that it was the only
meat
 type
which
Correct pronoun usage
whose
show examples
consumption
 experienced an upward trend. At the same time, fewer
people
 ate
fish
 over the time.
Fish
 was the least favourite
meat
 among individuals as its
consumption
 in
grams
 per person per week was equal to a little over 50. In 25 years there was a slight decrease,
as a result
,
fish
consumption
 ended below 50
grams
 in 2004, which was still the minimum of
this
 chart.
Although
 many
people
 used to eat lamb in 1979, preferences changed and its
consumption
 declined from 150
grams
 to approximately 85
grams
, which means it halved. Weekly
consumption
 of chicken was about 150
grams
 in 1979 and after moderate growth, it peaked at 250
grams
.
The beef
Correct article usage
Beef
show examples
 was the favourite choice of many
people
 in 1979 being equal to nearly 230
grams
,
furthermore
, it was the maximum of that year in all
meat
 kinds, but after a dramatic drop, its
consumption
 constituted 100
grams
 in 2004.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • steady increase
  • most consumed meat
  • relatively stable
  • general decline
  • pronounced decline
  • over the years
  • throughout the period
  • depicts
  • span
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