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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
consumption
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 of various types of
meat
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,
such
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 as
fish
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, lamb, beef and chicken in one country in Europe in the period of 25 years between 1979 and 2004.
Overall
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,
people
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 mostly preferred to eat chicken rather than other kinds of
meat
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,
moreover
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, its
consumption
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 increased during
the
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that
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 time. It
also
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 should be mentioned that it was the only
meat
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 type
which
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whose
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consumption
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 experienced an upward trend. At the same time, fewer
people
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 ate
fish
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 over the time.
Fish
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 was the least favourite
meat
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 among individuals as its
consumption
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 in
grams
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 per person per week was equal to a little over 50. In 25 years there was a slight decrease,
as a result
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,
fish
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consumption
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 ended below 50
grams
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 in 2004, which was still the minimum of
this
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 chart.
Although
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 many
people
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 used to eat lamb in 1979, preferences changed and its
consumption
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 declined from 150
grams
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 to approximately 85
grams
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, which means it halved. Weekly
consumption
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 of chicken was about 150
grams
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 in 1979 and after moderate growth, it peaked at 250
grams
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.
The beef
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Beef
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 was the favourite choice of many
people
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 in 1979 being equal to nearly 230
grams
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,
furthermore
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, it was the maximum of that year in all
meat
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 kinds, but after a dramatic drop, its
consumption
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 constituted 100
grams
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 in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, meat, fish, people, grams with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • steady increase
  • most consumed meat
  • relatively stable
  • general decline
  • pronounced decline
  • over the years
  • throughout the period
  • depicts
  • span
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