The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The line graph illustrates the four different types of

air

pollution

emitted in the United Kingdom between 1990 to 2005 in

million

tons

Overall

, it can be seen from the diagram there all three types of

pollution

were decreased except transport was stable after minor fluctuations.

However

, the total

air

pollutants were significantly declined in that period. It is conspicuous that the highest

pollution

was transmitted by total

air

pollutants, it was 7

million

tons

in 1990, after that it fell dramatically and reached

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million

tons

in 1999,

further

, it plunged to 3

million

tons

after oscillation.

In addition

, the second highest industry, which produced 5.5

million

tons

in 1990,

and

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shrunk to 3

million

tons

and reached 3

million

tons

in 1996, after that it plummeted to nearly 2

million

tons

in 2002 and touched 2

million

tons

in 2005. Probing ahead, it can be experienced the transport did not make any major changes it emitted 1

million

ton

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tons

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in 1990, after some movements it plateaued to 1

million

ton

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tons

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in the next fifteen years.

Furthermore

the

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households

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air

pollution

was 1

million

ton

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tons

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in 1990 and it

continues

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continues to

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decline and

finally

touched 0.2

million

ton

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tons

show examples

in 2005.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, million, tons, ton with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

202 words

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