The line graph illustrates the population of three counties, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington state of Oregon which increased over 60 years, between 1940 and 2000. Washington has the highest population of three counties in 60 years

The line graph illustrates the population of three counties, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington state of Oregon which increased over 60 years, between 1940 and 2000. Washington has the highest population of three counties in 60 years
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The line chart shows the amount of people in three countries namely Columbia , Yamhill and the Washington state of Oregon from the
year
1940 to 2000.
Overall
, the most significant feature of
this
graph is the average number of the population increased over 60 years and recorded their maximum figure in the
year
2000.
To begin
with, the Washington state of Oregon citizen's number was 75
thousand
people
then
in the next 30 years it rose gradually to approximately 125
in addition
, the number inclined again but
this
time sharply to record a peak at almost 240 in the
year
2000.
On the other hand
, at the beginning of
this
period, Columbia and Yamhill had about the same figure and it was at 30
thousand
than in the
year
1970 it went up by 50
thousand
for Columbia and 150
thousand
for Yamhill respectively
moreover
, the population increased one more time but by stronger rate than the
last
time to record 75
thousand
and 90
thousand
.
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