The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the data of
people
who use underground railway systems in some cities in different countries all over the world. In general, the city which had the longest route was the first place
opening
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the system.
In addition
, the location which had the shortest distance is the place transporting the least
people
over a year. It is clearly seen that Tokyo was the third city that operated the railway system in the table
,
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and had 155 km.
However
, it reached a peak of the number of passengers commuting per year, at around 1927 million.
While
the system in London which had 394 km just carried about half of the travellers compared with the
people
in Tokyo. The passengers of Kyoto and Los Angeles show a different pattern. The systems are opened latest and just around 11 and 28 km in Kyoto and Los Angeles respectively,
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the
people
who
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underground in Kyoto are at the lowest point, at 45
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million
, and about 50
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in Los Angeles.
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