The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergaduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergaduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years
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The pie chart illustrates the activities that Anthropology
graduates
did at a university after achieving their bachelor's degree.
Whereas
, the table reveals the income worth of five years of working as an anthropologist.
Overall
, the majority of the anthropology
graduates
decided to do full-time work. As for doing a part-time job whilst continuing to study post
graduates
contributed the least. The employment salaries ranged from 25,000
USD
to over 100,000
USD
with three different types of professions. After they graduate, 52% of the students have worked full hours, and a quarter of them do part-time jobs. Regarding the unemployed
graduates
, the proportion of them is at 12%. followed by the number of students who do post-graduate study only, at 8%. 5% of them work a part-time job but
also
, continue to pursue their post-graduate study.The rest of the percentage remained unknown. As we can see from the table, after 5 years of working, half of the anthropologists who have careers in the government have earned more than 100,000
USD
. As for freelancers who work as a consultant, 80% of them got salaries from 50,000
USD
to 74,999
USD
the highest proportion, at 35%.
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