Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is an ongoing debate about whether
government
should spend extra money to improve Add an article
the government
environment
. Some Add an article
the environment
people
think this
is necessary work for our world
, whereas
others argue that funds should be invested in artistic fields
. This
essay agrees that more money should fund in
eco-friendly programs.
On the one hand, Verb problem
be spent on
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the authority
authority
should spend more resources Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
into
environmental Change preposition
on
protaction
programmes. Correct your spelling
protection
Environment
is the future
of all human beings. There is only one world
for us. As the largest public management unit, government
is responsible Add an article
the government
to protect
Change preposition
for protecting
people
's future
lives. In addition
, making investment
in Fix the agreement mistake
investments
environment
could improve everyone's quality of life. Add an article
the environment
For example
, Singapore was commited
Correct your spelling
committed
in
building Change preposition
to
as
a garden city. With its Change preposition
apply
environment
improvement, the local residents' lifespan had a Replace the word
environmental
signigicant
increase and Correct your spelling
significant
get
to Wrong verb form
got
top
Add an article
the top
in
the Change preposition
of
world
now.
On the other hand
, some Correct your spelling
individuals
inviduals
strongly believe that it would be better to put money into artistic Correct your spelling
individuals
fields
, Correct your spelling
because
becasue
art can enrich Correct your spelling
because
people
's Correct your spelling
spiritual
spritual
Correct your spelling
spiritual
world
. In fact, there is a realistic issue that we must consider is that
how can we allow the limited resources to produce maximum effectsVerb problem
:
.
Investing Change the punctuation
?
environment
is investing people's
Change preposition
in people's
future
. With the improvement of environment
, everyone will have a better life quality, so they can pay more attention to the Add an article
the environment
fields
that they are interested.
Change preposition
in.
This
will also
indirectly contribute to the development of arts
.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
the arts
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the authority
authority
should cost more Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
fundings
Fix the agreement mistake
funding
into
Change preposition
to
environment
programmes. Replace the word
environmental
Although
arts is
important to our Change the verb form
are
spritual
Correct your spelling
spiritual
world
, the investment for
Change preposition
in
environment
is the investment for all Add an article
the environment
fields
of people
's future
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Grammar and Punctuation
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Supporting Details
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Task Response
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