Most agree that we should be training children to recycle wastes to preserve the Earth’s natural resources. However, some believe that parents should teach their children to recycle waste while others feel schools are more responsible. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that

parents

should be the

one

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who teach their

children

the

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of recycling for the environment,

while

others believe that it is the responsibility of the school.

This

essay agrees with the notion that

parents

should be the

mentor

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mentors

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of their

kids

the teach

the

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them the

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right way to recycle

waste

, As they have the most influence

in

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the

children

and can always

supervised

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them to do better at reusing

waste

.

Parents

are naturally the role models of their

kids

, and they

will

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likely to be more obedient towards their

parents

than the teachers in school. the amount of time that

children

have

spend

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with their

parents

have

build

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up these feelings of trust and safety.

That is

why they often rely on their

parents

'

decision

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when trying to do something.

while

teachers would probably require more time to bond with their students.

Therefore

, it is likely that the

children

would learn how to recycle

waste

appropriately from their

parents

.

For instance

, in Indonesia, many young

kids

have their own

recyle

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recycle

bin in their room to learn how to

devided

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divide

different trash in their home. Another thing to consider is

,

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that, family

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family

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the family

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especially the

parents

are the only adults

that

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who

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could

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can

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always

monitored

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their

kids

'

behavior

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behaviour

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.

This

will make them the

most strong

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strongest

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candidate to be the teacher of their own

children

, as they can easily correct any mistakes of their

children

during the process of learning.

Therefore

,

children

could learn how to properly

preserved

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preserve

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the earth's natural resources by reusing their

waste

. to

illustrates

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this

, many

parent

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parents

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have their own rules about

waste

in the house,

for example

, all of the family

member

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members

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should reuse the plastic bags that the

parents

have provided in the house. In conclusion, it is more important to have

the

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apply

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parents

to

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apply

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teach their

kids

of

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apply

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the right way to recycle

waste

for

earth's

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the earth's

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preservation

on

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of

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natural resources rather than

school

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a school

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because they have the most influence and

have

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apply

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control

on

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over

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monitoring their

children

 all the time.