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The pie chart shows what languages used for web content as of May 2023. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows what languages used for web content as of May 2023. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart displays the percentage of
languages
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 used for website
content
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 in May 2023. All things considered,
English
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 and Persian have become the highest and the smallest
content
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languages
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 for
websites
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.
According to
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 the graph,
English
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 has become the favourite
content
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language
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 for
websites
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. Around half of all
websites
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 used
English
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 for their
content
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 (55,6%).
Furthermore
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, about 14% of
websites
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 chose to use another
language
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. It can be seen that other
languages
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 are becoming the second favourite after
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english
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. Despite the fact that the ratio between
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english
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 and other
languages
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, the percentage of
websites
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 using Russian
language
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 was only 5.0%.
Besides
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,
websites
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 used Spanish, German and French sequentially about 4,9%, 4,3% and 4,2%.
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 3,6% of
websites
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 in 2023 used Japanese and at the same time Turkish, 2,4%
also
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 Portuguese and only 2,3%. The percentage of
websites
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 with
Italian
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the Italian
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language
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 in May 2023 became smaller than in
Portuguse
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Portuguese
, it was about 1,9%.
This
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 number is quite different to the Persian( 1,8%).
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, content, english, websites, language with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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