A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. Yoh have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves, say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her, explain how to apply for the job

Dear sam I hope you are well. I am writing
this
letter to let you know about the
job
which I recently saw
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newspaper
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.
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been ages
we
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since we
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have
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meet
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, well I was busy with my hectic schedule and I know you
was
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busy with
you
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your
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work
in
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abroad. I am happy to hear that you are back in your country as I know
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it's
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very
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hard life
in
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abroad.
Last
week I got your message that you are looking for
the
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job
. Nowadays,
its
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it is
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very tough to get
job
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a job
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in your field of study and I saw
advertisement
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an advertisement
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of
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new
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a new
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job
on
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newspaper
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the newspaper
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. So,
its
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it's
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technical
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a technical
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support
job
because
i
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knew that you have done
computer
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a computer
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system technician
in
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abroad.
As well as
they are looking for candidates who have 3 years experience,
that is
perfect for you. They are hiring as
full-tims
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full-time
and you
yave
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have
those certifications which they are asking
as
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job
requirements.So
i
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will send you all details of
job
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, if you are interested in the
job
title. Please let me know if you have any questions
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sincerely Sim
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better clarity. For example, you can discuss the job and its requirements in one paragraph and why it suits your friend in another.
task achievement
Pay attention to grammatical errors and typographical mistakes to make your letter more professional. This includes correcting sentence structures and specific words like 'yave' instead of 'have'.
coherence cohesion
Add transitions between your ideas to improve the flow of the letter. This can be done by using words like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' when adding new information.
task achievement
You successfully included the necessary information about the job, explaining its nature and why it would be suitable for your friend.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a friendly yet appropriately formal tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend concerning a job opportunity.

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