WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the necessary processes to generate electricity using coal. Generally, the process
involve
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mining, transporting, and generating energy.
Firstly
, as the source for generating
elecricity
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electricity
, blocks of coal, extracted from a mine,
is
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are
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crushed into smaller parts for the convenience of future procedures. The coal was
then
loaded
to
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a trolley that carries the coal from the mine
,
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and transferred to a truck
which
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and
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the coal was delivered to the
Gassifier
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gasifier
. Once the coal
has
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had
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arrived, the coal was
gassified
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gasified
classified
from a solid form to
gas
by the
gassifier
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gasifier
classifier
,
while
solid waste
remianed
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remained
will
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would
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be
disposed
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. After that, the coal
gas
was cooled by a cooler which the
gas
is
then
proceeded to a
gas
power plant. At the
gas
power plant, electricity was generated by the turbines, which were powered by the coal
gas
supplied, with heat waste
additionally
generated. Ultimately, the electricity generated will be provided to houses and industries nearby.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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