WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the necessary processes to generate electricity using coal. Generally, the process
involve
mining, transporting, and generating energy.
Change the verb form
involves
Firstly
, as the source for generating elecricity
, blocks of coal, extracted from a mine, Correct your spelling
electricity
is
crushed into smaller parts for the convenience of future procedures. The coal was Correct subject-verb agreement
are
then
loaded to
a trolley that carries the coal from the mineChange preposition
onto
,
and transferred to a truck Remove the comma
apply
which
the coal was delivered to the Correct word choice
and
Gassifier
.
Once the coal Correct your spelling
gasifier
has
arrived, the coal was Wrong verb form
had
gassified
from a solid form to Correct your spelling
gasified
classified
gas
by the gassifier
, Correct your spelling
gasifier
classifier
while
solid waste remianed
Correct your spelling
remained
will
be Wrong verb form
would
disposed
. After that, the coal Add the preposition
disposed of
gas
was cooled by a cooler which the gas
is then
proceeded to a gas
power plant.
At the gas
power plant, electricity was generated by the turbines, which were powered by the coal gas
supplied, with heat waste additionally
generated. Ultimately, the electricity generated will be provided to houses and industries nearby.Submitted by 788seal on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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