It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is a common belief that some people are born with innate

talents

,

such

as sports and

music

. It is sometimes argued that any child can be taught to become a good sportsman or

musician

. I personally believe that

although

creative things like sports and

music

require innate

talents

, if anyone can be taught to become a

sportsperson

or

musician

, it is possible. Becoming a

sportsperson

or a

musician

requires born

talents

. Those who are born with these

talents

, it is easy for them to become a successful

musician

or

sportsperson

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. When their born

talents

are discovered at the primary stages of their lives, they should go to the professionals to get

practice

lessons from them. It will not only help them to understand their potential

,

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but

also

how to utilize them.

For example

, in Japan, those children who are born with musical

talents

, start

music

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the

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professionals.

However

, I believe that becoming a successful

musican

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musician

or

sportperson

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sportsperson

sport person

requires more

practice

and hard work than

talents

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talent

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. If someone gets proper training about becoming a

sportsperson

or

musician

, he can easily become a

sportsperson

or

musician

. Being a

sportsperson

or

musician

requires a lot of

practice

and dedication. If someone

practice

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them hard consistently, he can easily become that.

Although

inborn

talents

are required in some cases, those who do not have those

talents

,

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can easily overcome

it

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them

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by

practicing

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practising

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hard.

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,

in

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Australian singer Joe Henderson once told the media that, he

did

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not born with his singing talent,

however

, his constant

practice

and dedication

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music

helped him to become a renowned singer.

Therefore

, I believe that

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to become a good

musician

or

sportsperson

, one should not compulsorily require born talent.

To conclude

, to become successful as a

musician

or

sportsperson

, one

do

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not

require

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to

born

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be born

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with those

talents

. Rather if someone practices hard, he can become a good

musician

or

sportsperson

.