4. Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is beter to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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people thinking schools should select

students

according to

their academic

skills

,

while

others believe it is

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better

to have

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of

student

abilities in the same classes. I truly agree that it should provide

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same

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skills

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in a wide range of

skills

.

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essay will reveal both

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of

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statement on my standpoint in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, there are some aspects of having many abilities studying together. One of the main reasons is

relaxing

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.

This

would mean that why the

children

have a wide range of academic

skills

, teacher will teach them

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the

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average

of

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academic lessons, which

does

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push them

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pressure.

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will teach all the

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simple lesson, with no doubt the

student

will

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the

class

.

Moreover

, the

children

could help each other. As can be seen

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when the

students

with many talents

study

in the room, they will guide their friends with the topic they

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with.

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,

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kind of

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positive environment with feelings and actions.

On the other hand

, despite its detrimental impact, there are several reasons why selecting

students

with the same academic

skills

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important.

Firstly

,

this

could improve the talent

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.

This

is because when the

student

with the same talents

study

in the same room, they will gain more

their

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knowledges

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.

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, the

mathematics gifted

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children

would learn the

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lesson,

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their mathematics will

be upgrade

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from normal, or they will have

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possibility

possibilities

to learn for the next step from the standard lessons.

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, most of the

children

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have the same level of the academic

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often

have the same interest.

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students

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at music, most of them

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to

study

at music

class

than the other

class

.

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,

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interested

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in the same would lead to benefits

to

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the

students

To put it simply, as aforementioned above,

while

it is true to say that a wide range of

student

skills

will provide the

student

be more relax

while

they

study

, in fact, I personally view that with the same

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abilities

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it will improve the

studentskills

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student skills

, and

also

it will provide the interest lesson to the

students

.