The table below shows annual incomes (in thousand USD) of different educational levels in the country of Fantasy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write about 150 words.

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The table illustrates the yearly earnings (in

thousand

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USD

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) of people with varying educational levels in Fantasy from 2018 to 2021. In general, individuals with advanced qualifications enjoyed the highest salaries. In 2018, Doctoral

Degree

holders topped the chart with 60

thousand

USD

while

Upper Secondary School Diploma recipients were at the bottom with 18

thousand

USD

. Despite minor fluctuations, earnings for those with a Doctoral

Degree

peaked at 61

thousand

USD

in 2021. Master’s

Degree

earners remained fairly consistent, with figures between 48 and 50

thousand

USD

In contrast

, Bachelor’s

Degree

holders experienced a decline, starting at 40

thousand

USD

in 2018 and dropping to 35

thousand

USD

by 2021. A notable upward trend was seen among those with Vocational College Diplomas, whose income rose from 35 to 45

thousand

USD

. Meanwhile, Upper Secondary School Diploma holders saw slight variations, reaching a high of 22

thousand

USD

in 2019 before settling at 20

thousand

USD

in the final year.

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