The table below shows annual incomes (in thousand USD) of different educational levels in the country of Fantasy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write about 150 words.

The table below shows annual incomes (in thousand USD) of different educational levels in the country of Fantasy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write about 150 words.
The table illustrates the annual incomes (in
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) of individuals at different educational levels in Fantasy from 2018 to 2021.
Overall
, those with the highest qualifications consistently earned the most,
while
individuals with an Upper Secondary School Diploma had the lowest earnings. Income trends varied significantly depending on the level of education, with notable shifts over the period. In 2018, those holding a Doctorate earned the highest salary at $60,000, followed by Master’s degree holders who earned $50,000. Individuals with a Bachelor’s qualification made $40,000, and those with Vocational College training received $35,000. Meanwhile, people with only an Upper Secondary School Diploma earned $18,000. By 2021, incomes for Doctorate and Master’s holders remained largely unchanged,
while
Bachelor’s earners experienced a drop to $35,000.
In contrast
, Vocational College graduates saw a 30% increase, reaching $45,000.
Additionally
, those with an Upper Secondary School Diploma saw their income rise to $20,000 after previous fluctuations.
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