The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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budget in three categories and the expenditure
amount
in four different countries between 1974 and 2014.
Overall
, it is evident that the distribution of financial
supports
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showed a significant increase in all aspects and the
amount
of money paid out in all nations remarkably decreased.
To begin
with, in 1974, medicine contributed around 80
million
, making it the largest
amount
received.
Following
this
, catering and finance had a similar
amount
which was 70
million
. By 2014, the number of medicine dropped to 60
million
by 2014. At the same time,
while
the finance aspect reduced to approximately 65
million
, the catering
amount
sharply fell to nearly 15
million
which made it the lowest category. Moving to the table, South Africa had the highest expenses, accounting for 65
million
and 42
million
in 1974 and 2014, respectively. China had the second largest expenditure in 1974 with
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amount
of 62
million
.
However
, it plummeted to only 6
million
by 2014 which made it the bottom position of total spending.
While
Indonesia spent 55
million
to 30
million
, Thailand paid out 48
million
to 18
million
from 1974 to 2014.
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