The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
A glance at the given diagrams depicts the life cycle of salmons, which are large fish that live in different habitats.
Overall
, the life of the highlighted creature has four main steps. In addition
, the process of their living takes nine years. This
cycle starts with eggs.
Actually, their life begins as eggs among reeds in upper rivers beside small stones. They stay in this
circumstance for approximately 5 to 6 months. After the mentioned stage, they convert to fry. In addition
, this
version of salmon fish has a 3 to 8cm length, and they reside in lower rivers or, in other words
, fast-flowing rivers. Moreover
, this
stage takes four years.
In the third stage, they live as smolt. The smolts are wider than fry, so they are between 12 and 15cm. Furthermore
, the smolts live in open sea over a period of 5 years. Eventually, they convert to adult salmon in the sea.Submitted by speher2000behroozifar on
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