The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The two maps above depict information about the development of
village
of Ryemoth in the years 1995 and now. Add an article
the village
Overall
, it can be seen that there are some changes, and some areas are also
removed or transformed into other areas.
First,
the farm land
and forest Correct your spelling
farmland
park
has
been removed and Correct subject-verb agreement
have
alter
with Wrong verb form
altered
sport
games. Change the noun form
sports
On the other hand
, the housing has been increased on other side the west side of the road. The area must be shared with other sites, such
as the car park
opposite the hotel. Furthermore
, in
present the fishing port and shops Change preposition
at
it has
been changed Wrong verb form
have
also
and replace
with apartments and restaurants.
Afterwards, the size of the car Change the form of the verb
replaced
park
was decreased. In addition
, the area was divided into two places, a car park
and bike storage. Moreover
, the library was replaced and located among two college buildings. Additionally
, a sports centre was added. Last
, a small tree still remains in its position in the right centre.Submitted by walkuwari11 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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