The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011,and2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011,and2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of house
property
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properties
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in the US across five
income
groups in 2007,2011 and 2015. In 2001,
number
of households was the highest in the
group
of $10000 or more annual
income
, at around 29m.
This
figure declined to about 28m in 2011,
lagged
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behind the groups of less than $25000 and between $50000 and $74999, before climbing to the highest again in 2015, at approximately 33m. In comparison, people who had
annual
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an annual
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income
of $75000-$99999
were owning
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the least
number
of houses throughout the period, at nearly 14m in 2007,
then
fluctuated slightly over the eight years, reaching 15m in 2015. Meanwhile, the less than $25000
group
and $25000-$49999
group
, started at 25m and 27m respectively in 2007, both saw a
shlightly
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slight
rise in 2011
,
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before
fell
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steadily to around 27m and 28m respectively by 2015.
While
, the
group
of
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an
income
of $50000-$74999 remained constant throughout the years in terms of property
number
, at around 21m.
Overall
, for all
income
groups the
number
of households slightly
droped
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dropped
by 2011, and rose again by 2015.
Howerver
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However
, for people with
annual
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an annual
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income
of $50000-$74999,
this
figure remained consistent.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, income, group, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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