The income
that is
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on space programmes would be better
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on public services
such
as
schools
and
hospitals
. I totally agree with
this
statement because there are not sufficient
hospitals
to cover sick
people
, and many
schools
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not enough
computers
to teach
children
.
I strongly believe that
governmentCorrect article usage
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should
spentChange the verb form
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money
on
hospitals
because there is not enough medical attention for sick
people
when they look out there for help.
Besides
this
, if they go to
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the emergency
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room, it is frequent that they do not have enough equipment to make a medical
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, so
people
have to go back home without treatment.
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say the least,
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individuals have to wait for two months to find an appointment and
finally
see a doctor, and many of them choose to go to
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room but they end up not having good treatment because
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service is closed on weekends or
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. To illustrate
this
, in The United States, California, it is common to hear
people
complaining about not having medical insurance that
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their necessities, so many
people
travel to Mexico, Tijuana, to seek medical attention.
Another thing is that
children
need better
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equipment
such
as
computers
and keyboards to be taught in classrooms because many of these
schools
have
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materials at all. More importantly, many students have no
computers
at home, so they have to travel to local
libraries
to borrow a computer, so
this
implies
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time and
money
for them.
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is that if homework is for the weekend, they will have no
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to complete homework because
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are
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on weekends.
Lastly
, if they are lucky enough to find one library open, they might wait for one or two hours to find an available computer. To explain
this
, in Anaheim,
libraries
do not open on weekends, so many
children
usually do not complete homework by Monday because they have no
computers
at home.
As a result
, students' grades are presented as
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low
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at the end
of the year.
In conclusion,
governmentAdd an article
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should spend
money
on
hospitals
and
libraries
because there are not enough services to cover sick
people
and help
children
to improve their knowledge.
As a result
, I strongly agree with
this
statement because
money
will be well spent on
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necessities rather than space programmes.