The line graph below shows the number of complaints received by the complaints department of a single airline over a six-month period in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph below shows the number of complaints received by the complaints department of a single airline over a six-month period in 2009.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.  

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph gives information about the
number
of
complaints
sent to an airline’s
complaints
department from
January
to June in the year 2009.
Overall
, the
number
of
complaints
sent in person and by telephone increased,
while
the opposite trend was true for those sent by email or fax. The
number
of
complaints
sent directly to the department in
January
was slightly more than 400.
This
figure
was the lowest throughout the period.
This
figure
then
increased rapidly over the next months and reached the highest point of about 1900
complaints
in June. The
number
of
complaints
received by telephone dropped slightly in the first two months, from 900 in
January
to 800 in February.
This
figure
remained unchanged at slightly more than 1000 from March to April,
then
went up considerably to 1600
complaints
in June. The
number
of
complaints
sent by email or fax was the highest in
January
, at nearly 800.
This
figure
was quite stable in the first quarter.
This
fell to just under 400
complaints
in May and stayed unchanged in the
last
2 months.
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