Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age and live in a city.
Why do you think they move to cities?
Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people?
Submitted by Witharana Senesh Rasinda Wickramasinghe on
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Try to expand on your ideas by discussing specific reasons why young people move to cities, such as better job opportunities, educational institutions, or lifestyle choices.
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Introduce unique points and examples to highlight both advantages and disadvantages of moving to cities. This will help create a balanced and comprehensive discussion.
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