The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
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The graph provides data about consumer expenditure on various goods in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
Overall
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, we can see that all
category
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categories
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of goods that all
countries
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spent most on was food, beverages and tobacco, which was three times higher than on other types of items. The lowest waste could be noticed
on
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in
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leisure and education in all five
countries
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. Turkey spent the most 32.14
percent
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in terms of food,drinks and tobacco. The expenditure of Ireland was
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high, compared to Sweden which spent the least. Italy and Spain wasted 16.36% and 18.80% respectively. On the other side, the lowest spending was on leisure and education which accounted for under five percent in all
countries
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.
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, Turkey spent
most
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on these goods at 4.35% which is around double that of Spain. Clothes and footwear
was
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the third category of
customers
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customer
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expenditure named expenses for those items were between nine
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in Italy and 5.40% in Sweden. The average spending in these
field
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fields
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for the remaining
countries
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were
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around 6.5%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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