The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given illustrations provide
with
data about selling Change preposition
apply
coffee
and bananas
of Fairtrade categories between 1999 and 2004 in UK
, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, demand for bananas
in five European countries were
higher than for Change the verb form
was
coffee
in the same states. It is clear from the tables that Switzerland made a high profit in both categories of products in 1999 as well as
in 2004.
In 1999, Switzerland reached 15 million euros in banana sales, meanwhile,coffee
selling brought in an income three times less. On the other hand
, the lowest result was on bananas
and coffee
profit
accounted for under 2 Fix the agreement mistake
profits
millions
in all Change to singular
million
last
states in the same year.
In 2004, the second largest market for Fairtade-labelled coffee
was UK
with 20 million euros, Correct article usage
the UK
while
in 1999 amount
of sales Correct article usage
the amount
were
1,5 times lower. Interestingly the sales volume of the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
fairtrade
Capitalize word
Fairtrade
bananas
decreased in Sweden and Denmark in 2004 than in 1999. However
, in the same year
both countries increased Add a comma
year,
coffee
trade for
equally fractional 0.2 Change preposition
by
millions
euros.Change to singular
million
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