The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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data about selling
coffee
and
bananas
of Fairtrade categories between 1999 and 2004 in
UK
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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
Overall
, demand for
bananas
in five European countries
were
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higher than for
coffee
in the same states. It is clear from the tables that Switzerland made a high profit in both categories of products in 1999
as well as
in 2004. In 1999, Switzerland reached 15 million euros in banana sales, meanwhile,
coffee
selling brought in an income three times less.
On the other hand
, the lowest result was on
bananas
and
coffee
profit
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accounted for under 2
millions
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in all
last
states in the same year. In 2004, the second largest market for Fairtade-labelled
coffee
was
UK
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the UK
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with 20 million euros,
while
in 1999
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of sales
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1,5 times lower. Interestingly the sales volume of the
fairtrade
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Fairtrade
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bananas
decreased in Sweden and Denmark in 2004 than in 1999.
However
, in the same
year
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year,
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both countries increased
coffee
trade
for
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equally fractional 0.2
millions
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million
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euros.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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