The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon

The given diagram presents information about

population

increase between 1940 and 2000 in 3 different countries in the U.S state of Oregon

According to

the graph below,

overall

we can say that,in

Columbia

and in Yamhill,the

population

rise

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almost equally, with a difference of a maximum of 15 thousand

people

. It could be

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noted

that in Washington from 1940 to 1970 the number of

people

grew gradually from 75,000 to 125,000,but next 30 years,from 1970 to 2000,the

population

rose sharply from 125,000 to 245,000,and it is the largest

population

of all three countries.

Columbia

has the smallest

population

of all three of them,but despite

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it

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also

had an upward trend in the quantity of

people

.From 1940 to 2000

population

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almost 55,000. Now turning to the details the

year

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1970 to 2000 saw the

population

of

Columbia

and Yamhill increase by approximately the same amount that they had

rise

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by the 30 years before,but it

still

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conspicuous that Yamhill has a larger

population

than

Columbia

.The biggest difference is almost 15 thousand

people

.