The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.

The diagram below shows  how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.
The diagram illustrates the
stepping
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of manufacturing instant
noodles
, starting from
stroaging
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staging
floor in
solis
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to labelling and sealing noodle cups to market,
this
process takes 8 steps to complete.
To begin
with, the floor is delivered by large vehicle to store in silos and
then
transported to combine with other components including water and oil in the mixer, after that
this mixing ingredients
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is
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passed through the rollers forming a dough followed by cutting
in to
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the
noodles
discs by dough strips.
This
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noodles
discs
then
are cooked and dried before putting
in
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cups and adding some vegetables and spices. For the final process, these cups are
labeled
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and sealed before selling to the customers. In summary, making instant
noodles
requires 8 steps
begins
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with
stroaging
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stroking
floor
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in silos, transporting them to mix with water and oil, creating
noodles
by rolling, stripping and
then
cooking and drying, adding vegetables and spices before labelling and
sealling
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sealing
selling
in the
last
step.
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