The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.

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The diagram illustrates the

stepping

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steps

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of manufacturing instant

noodles

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, starting from

stroaging

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staging

floor in

solis

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Solis

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to labelling and sealing noodle cups to market,

this

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process takes 8 steps to complete.

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with, the floor is delivered by large vehicle to store in silos and

then

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transported to combine with other components including water and oil in the mixer, after that

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this mixing ingredients

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this mixing ingredient

these mixing ingredients

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are

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passed through the rollers forming a dough followed by cutting

in to

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into

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the

noodles

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discs by dough strips.

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This

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These noodle

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noodles

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discs

then

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are cooked and dried before putting

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them in

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cups and adding some vegetables and spices. For the final process, these cups are

labeled

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labelled

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and sealed before selling to the customers. In summary, making instant

noodles

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requires 8 steps

begins

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beginning

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with

stroaging

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stroking

floor

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the floor

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in silos, transporting them to mix with water and oil, creating

noodles

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by rolling, stripping and

then

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cooking and drying, adding vegetables and spices before labelling and

sealling

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sealing

selling

in the

last

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step.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

160 words

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