The below diagram show the life cycle of frog. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.

The below diagram show the life cycle of frog. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of pond
frogs
, beginning with eggs to adult
frogs
.
This
entire process
involes
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involves
nine subsequential steps.
Initially
, eegs are developed into embryos and
then
these small embryos grow into tadpoles, which are
subsequently
clingged
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clinging
clogged
to a
water-plant
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water plant
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. Once, the tadpoles form external gills for breathing, they keep growing a tail and hindlegs
consequently
.
Following
this
,
frogs
store their food in
its tail
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their tails
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before appearing
of
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their front legs and shorting of
tail
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tails
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. In the final staging, young
frogs
have
became
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become
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the
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apply
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adult
frogs
which
are continued
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continue
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laying eggs to maintain their life cycle. In conclusion, the cyclic process of pond
frogs
, starting from
eegs
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eggs
invole
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involve
to
embryo
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the embryo
an embryo
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and ending with young
frogs
turn
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turning
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to adult
frogs
. Each step is
essentail
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essential
for
development
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the development
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of these animals.
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