The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the comparison of aspects of
service
among three different health centres. Overall
, based on five aspects marked, Peveril Centre
has the
excellent Correct article usage
apply
service
, followed by Marchbank Centre
and Longston Centre
.
Looking at the table, the Peveril Centre
has an average score
8.3
out of 10 based on five Change preposition
of 8.3
service
criterias
. Correct your spelling
criteria
Moreover
, they obtain the highest score
for every aspect compared to other health centres. Patients give them the highest score
on the aspect of their response to concerns with 9.6, followed by booking appointments and doctor's service
aspects with 9.1 and 8.7, respectively.
Furthermore
, the Marchbank Centre
gets 7.2 of overall
Add an article
the overall
score
, where they get the highest score
on doctor's service
criteria with 8.4 while
the smallest score
on pharmacy criteria with only 5.8. Meanwhile, the Longston
Correct your spelling
Langston
Centre
has the worst service
because the patients only give them an average score
5.8
, the smallest among them all. The lowest Change preposition
of 5.8
score
comes from response
to concerns aspect where they are marked only 4.3 out of 10.Add an article
a response
the response
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